Tuesday, February 11, 2014

Our Path



path chosen
we'll walk together
side by side
hand in hand
then arm in arm
seasons pave the way
gently, slowly at first
that season of young love, of firsts
of caution 
of exploration
i learn your touch, i know your hand, i hold on

path brightens
we walk with little ones
under foot
swinging between our hands
riding high on your strong shoulders
seasons 
so many seasons
colorful, vibrant
calm, stormy
those roller coaster seasons hurry by
i seek your touch, i treasure your hand, we hold on 

path diverges
we choose our way together
changed as we are
weathered
we choose together
we look ahead
blessings pave the way
and we beg the seasons to grow lazy
to be gentle and slow again
a pause for a flower
stillness
a breath, a moment
the cherishing
i need your touch, i hold your hand, we let go





20 comments:

  1. This was so touching and so sweet!

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  2. Lovely image to illustrate such beautiful words.

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  3. What a beautiful image and a lovely poem!

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  4. Beautiful poem and lovely wintry photo ~ thanks,

    carol and artmusedog
    www.acreativeharbor.com

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  5. it's good to walk that path together - hand in hand - with all the blessings and challenges the different seasons bring..

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  6. Adrienne, that was positively stunning. My husband and I are in the last season...grandkids now under foot from time to time, but I can tell you captured the handholding part perfectly.
    It just gets better.

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  7. Excellent writing. So moving. Stunning image too. I love your header and words. Sunflowers are such a huge part of my summers.

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  8. nice...i like the short bit of refrain at the end of each of the stanzas...and the change in the last...in the choosing together the path...and sometimes the letting go is not a bad thing for the time...there is security in each findin their own path a bit...and still being together.

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  9. Beautiful and comforting going through the journey together. Happy Valentine's Day!

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  10. Aww, that´s just lovely and I can relate! :-)

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  11. What a treasure! Love the way you come back to that hand holding at each pass...oh, time changes us, and yet we need to sometimes hang on, and sometimes let go...

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  12. A beautiful poem, a gorgeous picture and a lovely sentiment:)

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  13. This is lovely and enjoyed what you did with the prompt. Visiting from Project Underblog.

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  14. Beautiful poem and picture! :)
    Xo
    Marisa

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  15. This is beautiful Adrienne, just beautiful!!

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  16. This is so beautiful and touching! Thank you for linking up with Project: Underblog!

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  17. Simply wonderful words to go with the photo. 'Love' described beautifully. :)

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  18. This so perfectly describes the many paths we walk. Thank you for linking up with Project: Underblog!

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  19. I love this as much as everyone else does. Truly beautiful.

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